Day of Darkness and Despair-Archive

2014-06-04 09:35:00 by Elias-Z
Updated

Sup guys,here you can find pages of my creepypasta called "Day of Darkness and Despair",wich i will turn into a visual novel pretty soon.

 

PAGES

Page 1- http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1777bb46851637761813d13f9e51093c

Page 2- http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/90de1bbe182c65dffbc2fc745054148b

Page 3- http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/4bfef31c05da40686c61d640c380a301

Page 4- http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/de884c7e73494481f8891c3ce1910904

Page 5-http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/6cdb69d2a05a641f00ed332aa061d367

More pages coming soon.

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Fivestar811Fivestar811

2014-06-04 19:27:38

Pretty interesting, reminds a little bit of final fantasy where characters just suddenly aren't real at the moment, and things just disappear. I wonder what will happen next.....
Great story :)

Elias-Z responds:

Thx bro :D


ExodusTerminatorExodusTerminator

2014-06-05 02:20:10

Interesting story :) i like it :D
Can't wait for more

Elias-Z responds:

Thx :D
Glad you like it :)


MelindiMelindi

2014-06-05 15:55:43

Nice story c:
Cant wait for more

Elias-Z responds:

Thx :D
glad you like it


SileNt-SamSileNt-Sam

2014-06-05 15:55:56

good story bro ! :D

Elias-Z responds:

Thx :D


MelindiMelindi

2014-06-05 15:57:29

XD basically what AUSANFORD said :P


CyberdevilCyberdevil

2014-06-07 09:56:11

Sounds odd that a school would be in a forest. And it started to rain... but you weren't impressed? Why'd you be impressed by rain? :P Despite stuff like that, the atmosphere really build up, it's getting pretty exciting towards the end! Looking forward to more.

Elias-Z responds:

Having a school in a forest makes the story more interesting. Idk why i put that "i'm not impressed" line there,my bad i guess.Lol my name isn't Brian but i thought about character names and it was the first to came in my brain XD
Thx for the constructive criticism!!!
It's my first creepypasta and i really need some opinions about it :D
Because i plan to write some other stories after i finish this one =)


DanluzDanluz

2014-06-07 18:51:33

It wasn't scary but everyone turned into Jeff the Killer the ghost.

(Updated ) Elias-Z responds:

lol what?
My creepypasta has nothing to do with Jeff.


UltrabiUltrabi

2014-06-08 14:52:58

Stupid, the class disepear, the teacher be slender"woman", and his best friend be a ghost?
That can be called creepypasta?
Well, a movie will be more scary than a book...
If has 8 pages this can be a guy playing slenderman...
And each page of slender is telling the story... THEY AREN'T REAL!
IT SAY'S IS A NIGHTMARE!!!!! NOT A TRUE HISTORY!!!!

Elias-Z responds:

Lol?
This is my first creepypasta,i doubt you can make a better one.
Slender woman,really???????
And the classes that dissapear and everyoane turning into ghosts add mistery to it.
Instead of calling it stupid,you should wait for more pages cuz' it will get better and better,plus the ending will be fuckin awesome.


DanluzDanluz

2014-06-12 16:37:44

On page 2, it said Billy had his skin turning white, like Jeff's. Then on page 3, it also stated that he had dark circles around his eyes, and everyone got with it. See? Jeff the Killer has all these things now got it?

Elias-Z responds:

Lol Jeff also has blood around his mouth,no nose,a knife and a white outfit.
Just because someone has white skin does it mean it is like Jeff!?????
I don't think so.
Maybe i shall make their skins pink to satisfy you :P


DanluzDanluz

2014-06-14 11:26:35

Chubby pink pls

Elias-Z responds:

If you don't like my creepypasta then shut the fuck up and write your own >:(


Mumbo-JumboMumbo-Jumbo

2014-06-28 13:07:31

Meh.

It's okay...and by okay, I mean I can read it without shitting myself, which is always good.

I APPLAUD YOU

Elias-Z responds:

THX MAN :D